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Its a good start but. . .

Here are some suggestions for your next flash movie
1) Try to compress the sound file or use a sound loop, it will make the file size much smaller.
2) Try to use motion tweens in your movie, it will make it more interesting and less choppy.
3) If you are going to use text speech then include buttons so the viewer has enough time to read all of the text bubbles.

It appeared that you put effort into this flash so I will give you a 2, but follow my suggestions and keep on improving.

Absolutely Hilarious

That was probably the best of the series so far ( Closely followed by episode 4 ). Hopefully the last episode will show more if you know what I mean :)

Dekathos responds:

Uhhh no you will have to search the completely unrelated sections, placed on this cartoon for that. :) Thanks for the review!

Loved it

Very good job of making a Ranma parody. I love the series Ranma and I must say you did a great job drawing the characters. I'm trying to learn anime so I can apply it to my flashes. Keep up the good work, maybe you can teach me a few things about anime :)

Dekathos responds:

Keep working on Flash and don't get disgruntled. I would do something very small so you can improve on it without being bogged down by length. ;) I know I don't practice what I preach. It's mostly because I didn't script any of the work I submitted and I when I don't write things down, I just keep adding and adding (Well you know.) Thanks for the review.

Offensive

You should have just kept that flash between you and your friends. To bad you didnt get the message the first time it was blammed.

I don't get it

That was the strangest movie I have ever scene. Even more sporadic then your Happy Birthday movie (which I must say was weird). If you could respond to this review with and explanation I would be appreciative. Good graphics and sound I guess. You should use your talent to make a humourous movie that people can understand and relate to.

Scarydoll responds:

Well, what exactly is unclear with this piece? The brief story is the following (please those who haven't seen yet don't read further) A girl is sitting on the window pane. Somebody is disturbing her. She's losing her balance and falls down. The King of the Flies happens to live downstairs. He wants to save the girl with the help from his subjects. He actually succeeds. The Girl is being saved escaping the Death waiting down. The end.
Anything beyond this storyline is for the personal interpretation of a viewer.
Although every little detail has a meanning

That was great

I loved the part where the kid wanted the pokemon and smashed into the glass. Try to make more of this series but with background sound or something. Keep up the good work.

Funny!

That was insanely funny. Make more 8-bit D&D re-inactments! Keep up the good work!

CyberMoonStudios responds:

i'm going to need a little more time.
this took me a while.

That was odd

Completely random but I gave you a good score because the graphics and sounds were smooth. Odd plot though, if you can call that a plot.

That was ummmm disturbing. . .

It's amazing how random acts of violence can score so well, *sigh* only on NG. I guess the graphics and sound were decent. I like violence as long as it has a plot behind it. . .

raitendo responds:

it's not a random act of violence... if you can't see the humour, I suppose there's not much I can say to defend it. but the joke IS there, even if you can't see it.

Awesome

Absolutely Awesome.
I love how you draw the characters, what programs do you use?
Also, the music was great, I love techno!

BADMAN responds:

It's all macromedia flash.

Enjoy making movies, watching flashes, and long walks on the beach...

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