SteelShot's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Twilight]

Its a good start but. . .

Here are some suggestions for your next flash movie
1) Try to compress the sound file or use a sound loop, it will make the file size much smaller.
2) Try to use motion tweens in your movie, it will make it more interesting and less choppy.
3) If you are going to use text speech then include buttons so the viewer has enough time to read all of the text bubbles.

It appeared that you put effort into this flash so I will give you a 2, but follow my suggestions and keep on improving.

[King of the Flies]

I don't get it

That was the strangest movie I have ever scene. Even more sporadic then your Happy Birthday movie (which I must say was weird). If you could respond to this review with and explanation I would be appreciative. Good graphics and sound I guess. You should use your talent to make a humourous movie that people can understand and relate to.

Scarydoll responds:

Well, what exactly is unclear with this piece? The brief story is the following (please those who haven't seen yet don't read further) A girl is sitting on the window pane. Somebody is disturbing her. She's losing her balance and falls down. The King of the Flies happens to live downstairs. He wants to save the girl with the help from his subjects. He actually succeeds. The Girl is being saved escaping the Death waiting down. The end.
Anything beyond this storyline is for the personal interpretation of a viewer.
Although every little detail has a meanning

[Martin EP 1]

That was great

I loved the part where the kid wanted the pokemon and smashed into the glass. Try to make more of this series but with background sound or something. Keep up the good work.

[8 Bit D&D]

Funny!

That was insanely funny. Make more 8-bit D&D re-inactments! Keep up the good work!

CyberMoonStudios responds:

i'm going to need a little more time.
this took me a while.

[I Love Egg ep.1]

That was odd

Completely random but I gave you a good score because the graphics and sounds were smooth. Odd plot though, if you can call that a plot.

[Ah! Mr. Schultz! - 01]

That was ummmm disturbing. . .

It's amazing how random acts of violence can score so well, *sigh* only on NG. I guess the graphics and sound were decent. I like violence as long as it has a plot behind it. . .

raitendo responds:

it's not a random act of violence... if you can't see the humour, I suppose there's not much I can say to defend it. but the joke IS there, even if you can't see it.

[E-vengers 2 (Cuba)]

Awesome

Absolutely Awesome.
I love how you draw the characters, what programs do you use?
Also, the music was great, I love techno!

BADMAN responds:

It's all macromedia flash.